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Because it's my fear... by =Shintei-chan:iconShintei-chan:



Once upon a time,Long time ago,
Before birth of life and time's flow,
After beginning and before the end,
I had a certain someone,my best friend.

We went through it all,together we stood,
Survived birth of life,the best we could,
Sailed across the time's rivers of sand,
We fought the beginning,avoiding the end.

          We made an oath,brothers we'll be,
          "Better than blood ones",I'd agree!

But,as in all legends and miths untold,
Jealous Fate took her book and unfold,
Silken pages,painted with runes,
Every page's turn like an orchestra tunes.

With every turn,she liked us less,
So she brought a beautiful damsel in distress.
With all her beauty and pure soul,
She caught my friends heart,she took it whole.

          But mad I couldn't be,for an angel she is,
          I was so happy she took heart of his.

He found true love,in all it's meaning,
But Fate's evil plot was just at the beginning.
"Brothers you may be,but not for long,
Now we shall see how your bond is strong!"

Brewing all the evil,all curses she knew,
Cast them on the angel,all hatred she grew.
As sparrow in the cage,Angel's freedom denied,
Crushing her soul,her body from inside.

          Ripping our hearts out,all we could do is cry,
          Our love for an angel will never dry.

So,as the one who loves her,my brother decided,
"To my angel's side I'll go,by love I'm guided."
My blessing I gave him,I love them both,
I know he'll come back,we have our oath.

As the time passed and Fate's curse failed,
Angel bloomed once more,Their love prevailed!
But Fate didn't panic,she got her success,
Brothers are now apart,a victory she possess.

          It's something I feared from the very start,
          That something will come and put us apart.

He promised he'll write me,every day,
But that sounded like a soap opera cliche.
A new life he have now,a beautiful spouse,
Two children,dog and a big house.

He wrote less and less,for holidays only,
He stopped after few years,he left me lonely.
But even tho,I'll always love them,
And happy I feel,I really am.

          And more time passed,I even grew old,
          My memory don't serve me well,or so I'm told.

But I'll always remember my dear brother,
For in my heart I never had another,
But I always get angry,because I was weak,
I never had courage,to let my heart speak.

I never wanted for you to leave,
I always knew it's something I'll grieve,
For the rest of my life,it ate me from inside,
And you never came to visit,you never knew I died.

          But even in death I know,I'd do it all the same,
          For your happiness with an angel,is my most valuable claim!
©2007-2009 =Shintei-chan
:iconshintei-chan:

Author's Comments

I posted this poem the other day,but I removed it cuz it's too painful to certain ppl...
Tho they saw it...Pandora's box was opened...but we managed to close it...
Now I can post it again...
it's a personal thing...from my life...
Kinda depressing too...

Sorry for posting poetry...I know I'm not good at it...
Sorry for my horrible english,especially grammar...
Sorry for posting it again...

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:iconfuryaun:
*nods* know the feeling, I just got it up on my wall today too lol

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:iconserebrineydrakon:
its not horrible shin-chan I find it very touching and beautiful if not painful. your poetry is wonderful *sighs contently* I wanna hear more now *smiles*

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:iconmartmeisterpaladin:
It's beautiful.

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:iconshadowed-angel:
That's really good. I mean it. You should write more.

Good job

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:iconvendor-lazarus:
It is quite good really...
I especially like the way you have managed to get all the rhymes to work..
Even though you have had to take some...shortcuts ,)...

It´s very emotionally powerful.
The end almost brought tears to my eyes.
Nice work.

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:icontoirean:
Thank you for putting this back up Ratko. It is a truly beautiful thing. And please don't sell yourself short, you do have talent as a poet, because what you write comes straight from your heart, it's not just a bunch of words strung together. Just remember what we talked about, this is never going to come to pass, I won't let it. :hug:

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:iconshintei-chan:
Thank you sweety.
I'm aware I'm not really a writer...but it's ok...we can't have it all.
But I can say it came from the heart...I'm very emotional person.
Thank you! I'm happier now

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:iconshintei-chan:
Thank you!
I like rhymes...even if it means twisting some sentences...
I'm emo person...:hug:

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:iconshintei-chan:
Thank you...
Maybe...I can write only under certain circumstances...

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:iconshintei-chan:
Thank you!
I'm glad you like it!

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